‘Ticket?’
‘Yes, yes, give me a minute, will you?’ With great difficulty, Sonali maneuvered her hand inside her purse, pulled out a ten rupee note and handed it to the conductor. She was packed tight like a sardine between an elderly gentleman and a heavily made-up lady.
She really should’ve caught the 8:30. If only she hadn’t got into that last minute argument with her son about not drinking his milk. It was getting increasingly difficult to breathe and to top it all, such a sultry morning! Forget about a place to sit, she barely had space enough to stand!
Gradually, she became aware of something rubbing against her back. Or was it someone? The thought froze her. She turned slightly to see a bespectacled, gangly young man right behind her. Who would’ve thought! Such a sincere looking fellow too! The vague irritation she’d been feeling all morning, finally distilled into rage. Bringing a menacing look into her eyes, she chewed out the words, ‘What. Are. You. Trying to do?’
The man immediately flushed; could barely meet her eyes — signs of guilt, clearly. Still, he managed to blurt out, ‘Madam, kindly adjust. You can see it is a crowded bus.’
‘Adjust? You bloody pervert! How dare you? Behave or else…’ — she left the threat hanging in the air for maximum impact.
Others turned to eye him now, surprised and shaking their heads at how deceptive looks could be! What a disgusting fellow!
By now the man looked like he was going to burst into tears — ‘Madam, if you are so delicate, you should better stay home.’ He probably intended to deliver those lines with a flourish but they came out all whiny and pitiful.
He seemed so crestfallen, that Sonali began to have second thoughts. Puzzled by his reaction, she arched around to have a better look behind her.
Her fears were confirmed.
The young man was holding a slim briefcase in his hands and it was the edge of the case that had been rubbing against her.
Have you ever mistakenly berated someone? 🙂
This post is the eleventh in a series of 26 posts that I am writing throughout the month of April as part of the A to Z challenge 2016.
Oh, yeah. and had others berate me for stuff.
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🙂 Thank you for visiting!
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Are you new to blogging? Didn’t see any post?
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No. Just use this for commenting on WordPress blogs. My blogs are on the Other site. Hoping to get my author site fully up and running soon.
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Ah I see. Good luck with that!
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ha ha..good one !!! I think we all may have , at some point or other..
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Yes, not a great feeling afterward 😀
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Oops … how did you handle it after that ? Guess there was a shift of embarrassment……. But such is the public transport in India.
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Yes, the embarrassment must’ve been all Sonali’s 😉 You’re quite right of course about public transport in India.
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You are such a great story-teller! Another great post. And yes, definitely, been there done that 😀
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Hahaha…many times our suspicions are justified though 😦 A lot of molestation happens in public transport in India. You are such a generous person, Gulara.
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Unfortunately, I used to experience that molestation almost daily in Azerbaijan. Public transport was dreadful when I was a kid 😦 I have a whole chapter in my book about that…
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Really? Azerbaijan sounds more and more like India I must say! I must read all your books Gulara, will get to them one by one 🙂
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I haven’t published them yet 😀 But it’s good to know that you’d read them.
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Haha…you know I would 🙂
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I’m a bit more energized to start L now, after your praise.
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Excellent!
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Ive certainly judged -and misjudged people when travelling. Sometimes when that happens I have to challenge myself and look for another way of looking at things. I enjoyed your post and thanks for liking mine
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I really enjoyed your post and hope to get back to your blog and read more in the coming days.
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